|Nice one! Good Job!|
|Ok, I am unimaginative about any kind of narration. Your story is not funny, not interesting, not poetic and doesn't tell me anything (so there is no sense to it except that the screens show minotaurus). The screens are ok, but due to all the side effects (infusions, weapons glowing, jewelry) there are no details to be seen, although the armor mix by itself I find quite nice. Unfortunately this is not more than silver.|
This is not my comment, but it perfectly shows the troll level of people doing the presentation here. I calmly did not judge the presentation. So just leaving nothing worth commenting on troll personalities on this page. If one day they give you a ritualist profession, you are ready for this occasion. Cool cosplay, of course.