|I like your cosplay and that's a good start. |
A few criticisms, though. Maybe you add some description (how did you get the idea or something about Time Raveler, for people who don't know it), some more screens (with combat movement/weapons, with neutral background, like login screen or hero panel, a comparison screen with Time Raveler can't hurt either, etc.) For the purely visual impression I would advise you not to always leave your character centered in the picture and try something else with camera settings under options (F11). These are reasons why I only give you silver.