Zadar, The Auric Battlemage

By Mista Fashionista on August 12th, 2019
Race: Human
Gender: Male
Armor: Light
Color: Gold
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I give you Zadar, the Auric Battlemage.

I originally did a story post where his look changed through progress, but someone pointed out it was too much, so here he is in his Auric form only.


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Frans
Fashion Guru
For the first try, that looks good.
However, it would be an advantage if you insert a screen with neutral lighting (hero panel). Since I don't know if this is due to Tarir light conditions, the beard of your character looks terrible. With a strict plait hairstyle that is bright white, such a shaggy yellow gray beard... 3 parts from Warbeast Set is already close to pain threshold, but ok. The armor colors don't convince me either. Maybe add a third color to the chest part or some parts, like e.g.: color boots differently etc. (the boots bother me most, although I see your idea to color the shining part matching the gloves/rod). A short description, why you have decided for this armor mix/ colors etc. would give more clarity. The screens are ok, but I see a lot of potential for improvement.
Solid Silver
2019-08-13 6:11

mkene
Stylist
I like very much that you didn't run with gold+green = auric -- this is an interesting take. The red looks rich and stately with the touch of gold. I'm sorry I missed your story. :/ Is there any way you would feel comfortable posting it again?
2019-08-13 11:48

Mista Fashionista
Stylist
Thanks for the feedback. The beard color was definitely affected by the environment lol. I should've noticed that before posting the screens. I'll see what I can do about a third color.
2019-08-13 15:00 in reply to Frans

Mista Fashionista
Stylist
thanks! yea I chose to run red instead because he's a mortal Auric, not exalted, and it just looks better to me that way. Maybe I'll post a shorter version of the story.
2019-08-13 15:01 in reply to mkene