|For the first try, that looks good.|
However, it would be an advantage if you insert a screen with neutral lighting (hero panel). Since I don't know if this is due to Tarir light conditions, the beard of your character looks terrible. With a strict plait hairstyle that is bright white, such a shaggy yellow gray beard... 3 parts from Warbeast Set is already close to pain threshold, but ok. The armor colors don't convince me either. Maybe add a third color to the chest part or some parts, like e.g.: color boots differently etc. (the boots bother me most, although I see your idea to color the shining part matching the gloves/rod). A short description, why you have decided for this armor mix/ colors etc. would give more clarity. The screens are ok, but I see a lot of potential for improvement.
|I like very much that you didn't run with gold+green = auric -- this is an interesting take. The red looks rich and stately with the touch of gold. I'm sorry I missed your story. :/ Is there any way you would feel comfortable posting it again?|
|Thanks for the feedback. The beard color was definitely affected by the environment lol. I should've noticed that before posting the screens. I'll see what I can do about a third color.|
|thanks! yea I chose to run red instead because he's a mortal Auric, not exalted, and it just looks better to me that way. Maybe I'll post a shorter version of the story.|