Death's Servant V2: Commander Evolution

I decided to remade my reaper, as he jumped into his commandering role. He is my main, so he will be the one, whom will I use in the PoF and LWS story. Lower I enclose the original backstory.The purple scent is set to fit with the greatsword - Menzie's Agony (what a cool name for necro's gs, lol).

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When He walks through the Black Citadel, the omnipresent clash of iron will cease. Cubs hide behind adults. Adult Charrs try to look away to not facing Him, or they change their steps. Everyone calms their voice to whisper. He spreas fear far ahead. He doesn't talk much, but when He does, His creepy voice is deep and icy, creating goosebumps.

How rumors say, when Tyrrghan was a cub, he walked too far away from the fahrar. He wanted to be a blood legion soldier, fighting in the first line of the war. But the fate had different plans with him. He was kidnapped to Ascalon ruins. Rumors say, that those kidnappers were falllen darkest Ascalonian sorcerers, who were imprisoned for ages even in times of the original Ascalonian city Rin. They fled after the Foefire, and as all Ascalonians, even these sorcerers wanted to destroy Charrs. They chose the Tyrrghan to find secret of Charr's resilience. They beat him, and tortured with dark magic to make him tell, But their magical torturing changed Tyrrghan so much, that he almost became one of them - that scared them and they fled unknown to where. His face mark he got, wasn't washable, turning his look to monster. He got strange power, that was not only physical, but also magical. He found that he has ability to turn life to death, and also conversely. His power frightened him. He felt like the Death's Servant. He lived in seclusion for years, till he was adult. Even ghosts were scared of him, so he had not troubles to live in the underground, under the Ascalonian ruins. Once he came back to Black Citadel, he became the only Gladium, who has total respect. No one will allow themself to doubt about it.