|To be honest It looks a little messy.|
I don't feel the shoulders and the back are suitable for the rest of your set.
If not for that, I believe you have a good foundation for something quite good!
|The scythe staff looks really out of place here, same for the staff and the backpack. |
If you were going for a Zeus themed look, I'd recommend maybe switching the hair/beard color to something more saturated or lighter. Same for the golden dyes you're using, they're not really creating a godlike effect to the character, actually the exact opposite. A brighter dye like illumination for example might work a little better here.