|She's got a pretty face. And your screens are really great!|
But, but, but, but... Even if you write twice: " I hope you like her" & "I hope you like it ;)"- that's no description ;) Culture armour is not a mix of armour! So originality = 0. Too bad, but so I can not give you a good rating.
|thanks for comment and i am not good in writing storys :D and i'll try to edit the story.|
|Looks a bit bottom heavy, i'd look for other shoulders|