Project Manager for Dredge Power Suit

By Frans on February 4th, 2019
Race: Asura
Gender: Male
Armor: Heavy
Color: Multi
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Hello Guys,
Today I want to show my warrior. At first I wanted to use Mark Y Golem as my back, but after I bought Inquest Mark II Axe Skin, I noticed - it doesn't go so well together.
So I built the whole look to fit the Axe Skin. I don't have an Inquest Mark II Greatsword Skin and was thinking about what to choose... I think I can use Dusk first, which fits quite well to my current outfit. As for armor, I tried different colors (from silver to orange) for accents, finally I decided for golden sheen.
My weapons are: Inquest Mark II Axe & Dusk
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Constructive criticism is welcome.
I hope you like Asura and have a lot of fun :)


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A_Little_Norn
Stylist
He's a fun little guy. I'm all about going against type and putting characters outside of their common environment :) .

There are several things that stand out to me that keep me from giving gold. I do like the Tar dye, but Magma is so incredibly saturated that it's murder on my eyes. Those saturated colors are good for small highlight sections. I recommend trying a more muted, dirty red. Inquest Axe is cool, but the sleek design of Dusk doesn't match the rough, plated, geometric look you're going for. I recommend looking at Aetherized, Fused, Machined/Plated, or Reclaimed. Lastly, I like the close-ups that showcase your character well, but the busy backgrounds get in the way and are distracting. Especially the back view with the metal fence. Definitely put the character in their environment, but make sure it's not too distracting. I look forward to seeing more of your characters!
2019-02-12 15:54

Frans
Trendspotter
Well, Dusk is only an emergency solution - until I can buy Inquest Mark II Greatsword Skin sometime. And since I started building Twilight a while ago, I'm short of gold ;) As for color magma (I already mentioned in the description) wanted to get as close as possible to red from axe... And exchanging gold with red wouldn't be a solution either. Maybe I'll do a new armor design soon. Thank you for constructive criticism and suggestions.
2019-02-12 16:39 in reply to A_Little_Norn

morv
Fashion Guru
I really like your dye-job and your screens. Well done
2019-02-16 2:03

Frans
Trendspotter
Thank you very much!
2019-02-16 19:26 in reply to morv