Focusing on the black and white theme, I tried to create something that was more of a light armor look for the heavy armor class. Its my goal to create a sleek class look that blends completely different pieces of armor in order to make a unique armor set that flows well together.
Your character is in motion in most shots making it hard to see and provide constructive feedback. Get a standing daytime shot of him in LA or Divinitys Reach. Black should never be combined with dark areas if you want people to see your character.