I know this is your play through look so I don't mean to be mean. I like the hair and eyes. It looks like he placed a hunk of bloodstone on his head which I like. I feel like the chest piece and shoulder piece look great together (maybe even better with the lightbringer pack) but the blue glow doesn't work with your theme. It looks like your sporting a white mantle color pallet. Remember that they have a regal/knightly/cleric look for their armor so if you can find armor peices that look like heavy armor for the upper body and shoulders it would look awesome