Ok so armor wise it looks ok, a little bit too much rev armor but thats just me, screenshot wise you realy need to work on it, if you check other people's posts that have overall gold medals you will see they put effort into making their screenshots.
Dye choices are again ok but its very unoriginal nowadays to use just blacks and reds but again that may be just me so dont take this that serious.
0 work on description so can't say anything about that.
So yeah i hope you improve on your next post ...
