|Beautiful screenshots, striking colors. You have presented a unique concept with a bold choice of the South Sun mask. I adore your ambition. |
However, your ensemble lacks coherence. The leggings and the boots don't support the theme well. It becomes more jarring with vibrant contrast color.
Your concept is there, you only need to improve upon your armor mix. Sadly, that's the huge minus for me. Silver!
|Ohhh nice first post!|
The lore was great to read, lots of screens, (my favorites were the first row) and it's original!
You should consider going a more tribal route, she could definitely pull it off with the mask/weapons.
|Thanks for the feedback! I actually love the leggins as I wanted to include geometrical shapes already present in the mask. These geometrical shapes and the vibrant colours, as well as the use of white, can be found in Maori culture and clothing where I definitely drew some inspiration from. But I can see how they might go against Guild Wars' more painterly and textured look!|
|Great original concept, loved the backstory :)|
|Hello there and welcome to GW2Style community :) hope to see you post more :)|
About the look, I really like tribal looks and I think your screenshots are quite good and capture the beauty of your character very well. I'll have to agree with @Iris though when it comes to the armor mix! It's not that it's a bad mix, don't get me wrong, it's just that knowing ingame pieces I can place together some replacements that would make the tribal look really triumph! I can say by heart that the Tribal Walkers would have made sense, and eventually the Bounty Hunter's Pants?! Idk, just my opinion! Nevertheless it's a solid look and quite nice first upload, falling in love with the screens! (the 6th one with the swinging braid
|I actually like the choice of leggings. Other choices such as the Tribal Walkers are very predictable to me for this kind of look.|
Going for the geometric shapes is a far less common "tribal" look as oppose to the common torn and tattered style.
That said I think the Tribal Vestments would be a better top, and I don't particularly like the shoulder piece as well as it seems more ornate that everything else.
Definitely up there in the originality department however.
|Gorgeous screens and great use of linking to the tribal weapons, which are so infrequently used. Gold for sure. However, I do have some niggles with the armour concept that other's have already have expressed. Maybe you would have more cohesion if the cream was a tan/natural brown? Still, awesome and original first upload and a follow :)|