|Kinda Cliche to use the hellfire headpiece it has kind of become the staple of fiery builds, I like what you got the idea for but I think it could far take some improvements try mixing different pieces and try to eliminate the hellfire stuff altogether. Keep it up.|
|Perhaps I'm not the best to comment here as I've decided I seriously dislike my own recent fiery look.|
That said, I like the Hellfire helm with the wings (not the branded ones, they don't work). Some sylvari stuff is nice here (I like the breastplate) but it might be more interesting if you add some warbeast skins, or other such metallic pieces. The bounty hunter pauldrons have this facinating tail thing which could work as a demon/imp tail. Some of your screens are pretty good and you do have a general consistency in theme so silver I guess. I like the terracotta weapons but there are lots of other fiery themed ones you can consider such as the molten skins.
|As far as what you're going for here- it's pretty good. Outside of the restrictions of having a "Sylvari from Hell" I wouldn't personally say I liked it, but for what you are trying to mimic in your outfit I think it's about as good as it gets. Like bloodsoakedorchid says, hellfire armor is quite cliche for this kind of outfit, and there are probably some good substitutes for the shoulders/helmet. At their current state they look a bit too bulky and have a different look from the shoulders down.|