Sunspear Exile

By Crymonic on September 27th, 2017
Race: Human
Gender: Male
Armor: Heavy
Color: Black
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Lone exiled Sunspear walking around the Crystal Desert. Having being exiled from his home in Istan Aziz Turan wanders the deserts to the north. In his travels he has encountered the forces of the mad god... the Forged. Looting what weapons he can from these dangerous enemies he has joined forces with a guild known as Dragons watch. Together they are clearing the desert one forged at a time.


Comments


Delyn
Stylist
Good to see a new person showing off his characters, I can't wait to see what else you have in store.

Anyways, lets start on this look. I like the armor pieces you went with, they look like a set, without being an actual set (if that makes sense).
However when it comes to dyes I think you went slightly too dark there. I don't see any details on the Phalanx boots, which is my only petpeeve. (Also in contrast to the weapons its way too dark).

Also I woul'dve loved to see more of a backstory however. But regardless, the screens seem fine to me. So I'll give you a gold for your first post ^^
2017-09-28 3:44

Hetto Koala
Trendspotter
i was hoping more "elonian theme" weapons, but your character looks great btw ^^
2017-09-28 15:27

Iris
Fashion Guru
He looks a lot like the Corsair!!! My only peeve is the boots seem too plate-y for the region and period. They would end up like two boats full of sand! Get some sandals instead. Also, have you consider a curved blade. That would look so handsome on your character. Nonetheless, your presentation is very original and worth full gold from me. Nice name as well ;)
2017-10-01 11:48