|I think with a few extra screenshots and some action shots you could really push this look. I don't think the look itself is bad at all, and I love that you dye matched Caladbolg. It's kind of a shame those armor pieces only have 2 dye channels each because I actually love the silhouette!|
For now it's bronze for me (the biggest thing bringing it down is the lack of description - I feel like you'd be high silver or low gold had that been fleshed out), but with some improvements to presentation I'd love to give this look gold.
As a tip, never use your character select screen as your intro screenshot (I know a lot of people do it, but don't). It's uninteresting and doesn't tell people anything about the character.
|Thank you for the the tips, i made all this visuals just for fun but your replies gave me a lot of joy ^.^|
|It's a shame the snake isn't higher rez, since that screen of it with its mouth open is probably the best one.|
|The particle effects are a bit over the top. I think you could do with taking more screens in a lighter area.|