|Wow, just...wow! And a poem!! Okay, very nice use of settings which accentuate armor dyes. My only criticism would be maybe a little much going on in the way of auras and effects, but it fits! Great job! Solid GOLD!|
|Well, I don't really get where you want to go with your look. There's a lot of visual effects going on, and well, I don't really see why the title "White Shadow". It isn't white, neither really discrete for a shadow.|
The dye job is a bit hard to see, you should precise your dye in the dedicated section.
Good job with all those legendaries though ;)
|That poem is the mantra that the green lanterns repeat, modified - outside of that I think you should focus less on showcasing all of your legendaries and more on the look itself, as most of your backgrounds are too light and make the set appear to dark to actually see.|