White Shadow

By I NubCakes I on August 30th, 2017
Race: Human
Gender: Male
Armor: Medium
Color: White
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In brightest day
in blackest night
no necro shall escape my sight
no warrior shall build their might
let those who fight me feel my power
the white thief shall roam tonight

Celestial infusion blue + Winter's Heart infusion
Phospholuminescent + Black Poly infusion


Wow, just...wow! And a poem!! Okay, very nice use of settings which accentuate armor dyes. My only criticism would be maybe a little much going on in the way of auras and effects, but it fits! Great job! Solid GOLD!
2017-08-31 14:04

Well, I don't really get where you want to go with your look. There's a lot of visual effects going on, and well, I don't really see why the title "White Shadow". It isn't white, neither really discrete for a shadow.

The dye job is a bit hard to see, you should precise your dye in the dedicated section.

Good job with all those legendaries though ;)
2017-09-01 7:15

Vasto Prime
That poem is the mantra that the green lanterns repeat, modified - outside of that I think you should focus less on showcasing all of your legendaries and more on the look itself, as most of your backgrounds are too light and make the set appear to dark to actually see.
2017-09-02 18:12 in reply to sigshane