Warbringer

By Xuazinegueri on July 29th, 2017
Race: Human
Gender: Male
Armor: Heavy
Color: Black
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Style of a night warrior that seeks blood and death, using flames to consume everything on his path.
Weapons:
-Sword: Warbringer
-Torch: Wild Abandon
-Greatsword: Twillight


Comments


Hylek
Fashionista
The fiery gloves look kinda lonely in this armor-comb. You would need at least one other fiery piece to balance it out imo.
Apart from that, i dont really feel like it goes well with this very simple, clean cut plate armor style, that the rest of your comb has.
The shoulders too, stick out to me. They are more sophisticated than the other pieces and have this clean ornamental wing-theme, that missing in the rest of your outfit (except the backpack, but i will elaborate on that too). Also, they are the only asymmetrical piece you use, which looks a bit weird to me.
The black and red colour-scheme is super common andd boring. You should spice it up with a third colour ... maybe some orange hues to get closer to the fiery theme?
Twilight is the obvious choice here, but it drags the look very far into the meta category by reducing it to its black and red colour-scheme, making the other components of your theme kinda obsolete.
Sword and torch are a nice addition to the fire-theme. Especailly the torch is nice imo, since its rock-texture matches that of the ley-pants. You should try to match them colour-wise, to enhance the effect.
Last but not least the backpiece ... so far i could take the look and the theme seriosuly, but the backpack feels like a slap in the face. It doesnt fit the theme, the colours or the armor style AT ALL. Please dont use it :/

Presentation is important to receive good votes!
From the looks of your screens however, you didnt even move one step. Apart from that, DR doesnt really feel like the right place to me, considering your theme. And you didnt really pay attention to posing, camera placement or the background.

Overall this turned out to be a rather generic look, that doesnt even stick to its own theme.
And with this weak presentation it cannot be safed from a Bronze vote i fear :/
2017-07-30 11:07

Foxikill
Wanderer
Now u need the warbringer backpack xD
2017-08-08 10:39