Bloodstone Blood Centurion (Final)

This is my finalized look after taking into consideration comments about the dye colors. I toned down the colors and used darker shades. I tried to really make this charr look intimidating and angry as possible. Tried my best to show my charr entering a bloodstone induced rage.

Name: Tyrize Bloodrage
Blood Warband Affiliates: Kanurgoz Bloodmarrow, Menzhum Lifeblood, Zaishe Bloodseeker
Home: Black Citadel
Specialty: Blood Legion Trained Master Tactician, Master of Arms, Expert Brawler, Blood Stone user.

Bio: As a cub Tyrize was a scrappy adventurous thrill-seeker and often got his fellow cubs into trouble. He was stronger, bigger, and faster than any cub of previous generations. He was an oddity, and the Blood Legion immediately noticed and saw the future potential of Tyrize. One day while running across the Plains of Ashford with 2 of his fellow cubs (who he tricked into a race) towards the ruins of the great Northern Wall, they were ambushed by a group of 5 skales. Tyrize took broke a rusty trail marker and defended his fellow cubs from the skales, while the 2 cubs ran for help. When some Charr soldiers finally came to aid Tyrize, the skales had already been skewered and killed. Tyrize stood nearby the river and was trying to wash off the foul skale blood from his fur.

Many years later, Tyrize was a recently appointed Blood Legion Centurion and was the envy of his peers due to his young age. He was going on an assignment to help aid the Pact and General Soulkeeper. Coincidentally, Tyrize was on the same Airship as the Pact Commander when the Blood Stone exploded in the Magumma. Tyrize was briefing his Warbands on the assignment during the explosion and was stricken by small fragments of Bloodstone during the crash He and some of his warband had survived, but he could not keep consciousness and feel into a deep sleep. Weeks later after the crash he awoke in the dark room surrounded by a Charr named Menzhum and a group of Asuran. Menzhum explained that he is stricken by several shards of Blood Stones and are stuck inside his body. He was lingering on life and death for weeks, and the asuran were experimenting on him to save his life. Menzhum, being a Priory Archon of Blood Magic and Dark Arts, helped the the asurans stabilize his condition with asuran tech and blood magic.

Tyrize is afflicted with an odd condition similar to Blood Stone Madness that has driven White Mantle insane, but without the negative side effects. Tyrize feels something coursing through his chest and has a blood red visage that can never go away. The Asurans concluded he that he must intake trace amounts of Blood Stone and wear a special chest armor to contain the leaking blood stone magic emitting from his chest.. He seeks a cure for his condition and others afflicted by bloodstone madness. So he asked the aid of Menzhum, a fellow Blood legionnaire, to watch over his condition in case he goes mad. Thus forming his Blood Legion and seeking additional members.

NOTE: Will work on future warband member, I went pretty broke after spending so much gold. (T_T)