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WhiteScale Wanderer | Would marry. |
2017-07-23 18:08 | |
Delyn Stylist | Good to see your first post! It's decent, but I got a few pointers myself. I would've loved to see more 'Norn'-aspects in her armor, but seeing from the lore it makes somewhat sense why she doesn't wear that many of such clothes (I am saying 'many' because I find the shoulderpiece somewhat Norn-esque becase they symbolise the Raven) Also, the whole black and white theme is WAY too over-done. For me it kills the whole armor a bit. The dye-choice is a big negative for me on this set. The armor-choices are very nice, they all work together and there is a reasoning for the shoulderpiece. So I'd say that the armor is the best part. The description of her backstory is fine, but I would've liked the see a bit more screenshots, or atleast one where she is just in the loading screen. Would make it a bit more easier. Overall, good first look. Very close to a gold for me personally. Just the dyes. ((Also, I get why you used the gauntlets for her mesmer effects. But I would've used them only when she was using her magic.)) |
2017-07-24 18:30 | |
dellyz Fashion Collector | I think you should experiment with other colors other than shadow abyss. It drains a lot of life away, unless its thematic. |
2017-07-25 0:10 |