Young Raven - Norn Chronomancer

By Mijika on July 23rd, 2017
Race: Norn
Gender: Female
Armor: Light
Color: Black
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This is the daughter of my main character, Meekina.
She's a young norn of the Raven who learned the basics of her magic within the human culture. Why ? Because the humanity has a high level of mastery into the illusion magic and primitive uses of the Ether is bound to their History. Even the actual ruler of the krytians is known to be an overpowered mesmer.

Eternally grateful to this race, she tends to wear a hybrid outfit with the rich aspect of a well tailored piece of cloth from Divinity's Reach talented tailors mixed with some nornish aspect and the cult of the body, the pride of her fresh tatoos reminding to everyone she has started to build her legend.

As a true knowledge seeker, an apprentice chronomancer. She fights with the Flameseeker Prophecies and the timekeeper sword.

She is an absolute annoying smartass, she's a young norn of the Raven after all. She loves mocking at people and herself. She's very selfish.

Head: Ascalonian catacombs light armor. A black mask to do a little "beak" and also enhance her blue eyes giving her a calculating gaze.

Shoulders: I chose Arah's one for obvious reason, black feathers, it's so ravenish. CAW CAW CAW. Also the little "teeth" around the neck gives a nornish ornements aspect.

Feet: Council Ministry (Caudecus). Because it adds the "human". I do love those boots tbh. :P

Gloves: Chaos glove for the "mesmerish" glowing in combat. ^^


Comments


WhiteScale
Wanderer
Would marry.
2017-07-23 18:08

Delyn
Stylist
Good to see your first post! It's decent, but I got a few pointers myself.

I would've loved to see more 'Norn'-aspects in her armor, but seeing from the lore it makes somewhat sense why she doesn't wear that many of such clothes (I am saying 'many' because I find the shoulderpiece somewhat Norn-esque becase they symbolise the Raven)

Also, the whole black and white theme is WAY too over-done. For me it kills the whole armor a bit. The dye-choice is a big negative for me on this set.

The armor-choices are very nice, they all work together and there is a reasoning for the shoulderpiece. So I'd say that the armor is the best part.

The description of her backstory is fine, but I would've liked the see a bit more screenshots, or atleast one where she is just in the loading screen. Would make it a bit more easier.

Overall, good first look. Very close to a gold for me personally. Just the dyes.

((Also, I get why you used the gauntlets for her mesmer effects. But I would've used them only when she was using her magic.))
2017-07-24 18:30

dellyz
Fashion Collector
I think you should experiment with other colors other than shadow abyss. It drains a lot of life away, unless its thematic.
2017-07-25 0:10