corrupted thorn

By temeria on July 23rd, 2017
Race: Sylvari
Gender: Female
Armor: Light
Color: Black
Vote Breakdown
3 4
3 1
Must be logged in to vote!

sleek and deadly
shoulders are the dragonscale epaulets, reaper's gs and machined staff are the weapons.


Comments


guttergrave
Trendspotter
This is severely amazing. The look is perfect and pleasing.
2017-07-24 15:19

hellsqueen
Trendspotter
1. Screenshots need a little more work to really bring out your outfit.
2. Description needs A LOT of work. Trying explaining why you chose things and what kind of look you were going for. It helps people to understand the choices you make.
3. Honestly, I am not seeing anything real special with the dyes here and some colour choices used her seem out of place while other parts just seems to be mostly black with minimal variation.
4. I applaud your attempt to use Profane lowers, but I don't feel like they really helped bring anything to the outfit because they are hard to find a right combination for.

I wish you luck in future, I believe you have a lot of potential to grow. xx
2017-07-24 23:45

temeria
Stylist
thank you!
2017-07-26 3:06 in reply to guttergrave

DigitalKathe
Fashion Guru
It's a very interesting look, to be sure, but personally, I think it needs a bit more work.

I think the suggestions made here are some I agree with, but don't take it too much to heart if you really like it. I have 69 characters and not all of them will be featured here because I'd rather not feature a character with an outfit I'm not entirely sure will do well here.

Sorry, I hope I made my points clear enough and didn't come across as rude in any way.
2017-08-08 13:00