|I do like your dyes, they look really interesting and somehow feel appropriate for a mushroom headed Sylvari|
The armour mix feels a little directionless, I think it could be really cool to go for a full mage look with the shroom being the wizard hat!
Therefore I´d change the top to smth more robe-like and probably give her gloves
Would love to see that realised!
I do actually quite like the staff you are using right now and wouldn´t even change it
The presentation could be improved a little, as it is, the screenshots feel a little random, but it´s totally okay for a first look
Overall it´s a silver for me right now, but I´d be interested to see what you could potentially make out of this!