|Great! Gold looks realy nice with these dyes.|
|Thanks! I tried to avoid the darker Branded theme as much as I could with lighter secondary dyes.|
|I love your use of the crystals on the gloves and headpiece here! It looks really cool :D|
The rest of the armor-comb is great too! The ornaments on chest and legs look great combined!
And the zenith skins finally have a use here ;D
However, i have to say im a bit torn when it comes to the dyes. For my taste the golden colours are too bright :S
I think a darker, more realistic golden hue would fit better here. Right now the contrast between the dark purple and the bright yellow is just too much ... its a bit irritating imo :S
Another idea i have:
You could dye the 4th slot of the headpiece in a blue/turquoise hue to match the ornaments of the belt.
Your screens look very good! The poses are very interesting and you did some good camera work :D
Though the one thing that strikes my eye:
You should pay a bit more attention to the background. You either have the pure sand of the sandstorm, or a naked wall of rocks as background. Both arent very exciting ^^
Some screens from the branded area might have been nice too, since hes a herald of the dragon.
Overall i really like the look, but there are a few flaws, though minor ones, that i cant get over with :S
Its a very very good Silver from me, just barely scraping the Gold!
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|Thank you for the feedback! |
I changed the dyes to what you suggested and it looks a lot better in low lighting areas.
However, the only reason I avoided the branded area was because the character's story describes him as he was *before* he meets Kralkatorrik. I did add some screenshots from the area though - the purple suits his lightning pretty well.
I also left some of the previous screenshots, if only because they took too long to make to just throw away.
|Im still not 100% happy about the golden hue xD|
However, i really do like the turquoise accents you added! You even found a nice spot on the chest to dye :D
Regarding the screens ... i like the new ones you added! I didnt mean you should erase the old ones though :S
I get why you hesitated to use the branded area, but i think its still possible story-wise for him to be in the branded area before meeting the dragon. Though you might have a certain path of his story which doesnt allow it, so i cant say for sure ;)
Anyway, i like that you have more screens now and the new colours! So i can give you your well deserved Gold now :D
|Thanks! I get you on the gold dye; however, using a brownish-yellow color doesn't match his staff. Ideally, I would've used Golden Sheen, which is a nice blend between two extremes, but that costs 200g on the tp, sooo....|
|I like the use of the crystal pieces and the way they are dyed, it really sells the theme!|
However, I wholeheartedly have to agree about the gold, it really doesn´t go well with the purple, way too cartoonish
I´d honestly consider dropping the gold alltogether and maybe use something like Cinders instead, because I personally don´t think that you have to match the colours of the staff; you are already matching the style and that is more important
That being said I like the overall look and it´s definitely deserving of a gold!
|Wow very thematic! Great choice of weapon, I don't see it often.|
|Thank you! I felt that the crystals on the staff fit well with his theme.|