Steampunk Priest

By NapalmPriest on June 17th, 2017
Race: Human
Gender: Male
Armor: Medium
Color: Silver
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Sparkles are for pixies and homophobes. I roll steam hot!


Comments


Hylek
Fashionista
Too much magitech, too little presentation.
You shouldve tried to match the colours of the hammer maybe. I think it wouldve made the look a lot more interesting.
2017-06-17 21:39

NapalmPriest
Stylist
To be fair, I don't care about opinions and I don't respond well to any amount of spite. But I like to improve and even if ANY of my posts are not created for improvement, I am interested in your suggestion.
2017-06-19 12:45 in reply to Hylek

Hylek
Fashionista
How was i spiteful here, seriously?

And i even think i gave you the essence of what you should improve already:
- use fewer pieces of the same set
- the colour-concept is ok, but lacks a little excitement ... i wouldve liked to see your colour-scheme adjusted to the hammer a little more
- write some thoughts into your description (what was your inspiration; why did you choose those weapons; explain the theme etc.)
- take more screens and try to do cool poses, have nice backgrounds and work with the camera

Basically try to achieve the highest amount of what you can do for every slider.

However, if you are not interested in the opinions of other people and dont want to improve your looks or your presentation of them ... why did you choose to upload them in the first place?
2017-06-19 18:15

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