|Man the story is perfect for real. I felt shivers when I read it. The screenshots are pretty cool too maybe one in char selection so we see it well but I love it|
|Oh nvm there's a char selection one|
|I may not vote on this one: it's a wonderful piece of creative work and I almost feel it should be under the art look category. I don't feel like I can judge it using the traditional sliders. I'm sorry if this comes across as rude, and I may change my mind as the effort and skill involved with this is surely gold-worthy...|
I love your created screenshots of the dragons. They are my favourite part of this and feel really fun! I feel like he's sending epic!post-cards to his cub back home and this links in well with your story. It's a really interesting and different way of presenting a character. If only in-game achievements could be presented like this!
|Gold. Just because of those awesome screens :D|
|I think the same as Mihrean, it's more like an art, instead of look presentation, cuz when it comes to vote i have some problems, Those screenies are perfect, wallpaper lvl, the story is great as well, but the rest is kinda unoriginal in my opinion, when it comes to dye job and armormix. Cuz he look's like typical white t3 Charr. Maybe try to work a bit about those colors, play with them, the same goes for the armor mix, if u will try pull it of, and put together, u will get perfect look, with those descriptions and screens.|
|Not a very original look, there doesn't seem to be much effort when it comes to dyes, that hair and that face.|
I appreciate the effort in your screens, but when its down to pure looks its just not very good.
|This char's got more selfies than a horny 14-year-old.|