Pyro (Technic)

By Griever on May 31st, 2017
Race: Human
Gender: Female
Armor: Medium
Color: Red
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This tech-savvy thief uses her backpack and tubing apparatus to power her twin Incinerators. She also uses an array of Aetherized weapons. The theme here is fire, but from a technological origin rather than a magical one.

backpiece: Sabetha's Scorcher
glider: Ironclad
weapons: various combinations of Incinerator, Aetherized/Caudecus's/ Orange Kaiser/Crimson Assassin Pistols, Aetherized Shortbow, and "Bo" for her staff.
I also use Moto's Red Infusion for added effect in some cases.


Comments


wipalmi032
Fashion Guru
She looks really cool not sure about the backpack(mainly is because a thief with something that heavy) but I really like it
2017-06-01 20:38

Mihrean
Fashion Guru
Firstly, great attempt at a first upload: I can see you've put a lot of effort into this and have even included more screens.
I really like the concept of the backpiece and the twin incinerators. I don't mind the use of two of the aetherblade armour pieces because you require them for the tubing effect. This is cool and gives your character an interesting reason for the daggers other than shiny!legendary.
However, as wipalmi said, the armour looks out of place with it. It's very red and looks like you've tried to blend it with the infusion rather than the backpiece/daggers. It's also just mainly strider armour: Maybe something like flame legion would compliment your pyro theme more? Perhaps a hint of grey to tone with sabether's scorcher?
Great effort on your screens; and some of them are really interesting. My advice here would be to delete some of the gendarran hills ones (keeping the ones you like the most) and include some different screens from different locations- somewhere more technological like the black citadel/ molten alliance/ aetherblade areas.
Silver from me :)
2017-06-02 4:31

Griever
Wanderer
Thank you for the great critiques. I did have a little trouble bringing in the backpack (I even include some pics without it). I think adding some grey could help, but the bulkiness takes away from her otherwise "sleek" look that I wanted her to have. I'm definitely new with screenshots, so thanks for any advice on those. I have more looks on the way. :)
2017-06-02 10:52

IronPinecone
Trendspotter
I think the backpack is fine. I always look through the screens before I read the descriptions, and I never thought it looked out of place. I immediately saw how it was supposed to match with the Incinerators. And I'm going to have to disagree with Mihrean on the armor skins. There's only two pieces of Strider's (only a third of the whole set and the same amount as the Aetherblade pieces, which got a pass). More importantly, the way they work together makes them look like a one piece jumpsuit, and no other pieces would have that effect. As for Flame Legion armor, it would be too large and loose, likely catching fire or at least adding bulk, and it breaks the theme of tech fire over magic fire. I think it's perfect the way it is, dyes and all.
2017-06-19 10:20

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