Amber Oni

By Dacerus on May 27th, 2017
Race: Sylvari
Gender: Male
Armor: Heavy
Color: Black
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The Amber Oni. A flame for a heart. No more is known.


Comments


Dacerus
Wanderer
First post :3
2017-05-27 18:35

Elessar Taralom
Fashionista
Overall your character looks very promising, the screenshots just don´t really do him justice here
Since they are all very dark it´s hard to properly judge the dyes you´ve chosen
As a tip I´d recommend you to also take some screens in better lighting; plus it is common courtesy to add a screen from the character select menu
The armour is cool and from what I can see the dyes seem fitting, it´s just the presentation that needs a little polish
But since this is your first upload there is still plenty time to learn ^^
2017-05-28 5:02

Mihrean
Fashion Guru
I like the theme you are making here, especially the face, hair and sword. I'd suggest an ever so slightly brighter red, but that could just be the darkness of the screenshots as Elessar said.
2017-05-28 9:19

Dacerus
Wanderer
Thanks for the feedback, I appreciate it a lot. I'll try to find some brighter scenes to take more shots in, also added a login screen pic. :P
2017-05-28 10:28