Cat Asura

By Noheart on May 1st, 2017
Race: Asura
Gender: Female
Armor: Light
Color: White
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Mihrean
Fashion Guru
Colour. Colour is a thing which exists. The way your character's eyes match her hair so well suggests that you can use it. Honestly, I like the forgeman pieces, the gloves and the boots. They are interesting. The kitty ears and the scarf, not so much, especially as I'm really not sensing a cat theme here. Maybe a few electric greens to match the hair and the sab sword would work well.
2017-05-01 6:42

Hylek
Fashionista
Except the cat-ears, nothing about this look is related to cats in any way.
In fact, the forgeman pieces lead to a whole different theme. The armor comb looks ok (because its dominated by the 2 forgeman pieces) ... then you slapped the scarf and the ears onto it and BOOM it goes meta.
For colours you didnt strain yourself either. Black-white is the most unoriginal colour-scheme you could go for tbh. And it almost never looks any fashionable.
Your weapons also lack theme and sense. One set are your legis, the other set is this suuuuper fitting SAB gs ...
However, what irks me the most is your one-word description, with the only word in it being misspelled.
Your screens arent very exciting either. No posing, no cool backgrounds etc.
Sorry but this is nothing i can rate very high.
2017-05-01 10:28

frederickx
Fashionista
Interesting concept, but could use some work. The metallic armors don't match the kitten theme too well. Also needs better screens in daytime or somewhere with better lighting, it's hard to see armor details at night. Cute asura though =)
2017-05-01 23:57