The Meeting of Lexor

By OliverT on April 14th, 2017
Race: Human
Gender: Male
Armor: Medium
Color: Multi
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Previously in Chapter 1 -

Chapter 2 - The Meeting of Lexor

"According to my readings, there ought to be a powerful mage with deflection capabilities around the Harathi Hinterlands. Would you happen to know anyone who fits such a description?" Prime asked the Seraph captain.

"That would probably be Ulgoth. Why do you want to find him?"
"He could be... a distant relative of mine.."

The Seraph captain then drew his sword and sounded the alarm, "Any friend of Ulgoth is an enemy of ours. To arms!"

"Wait! You don't understand!"
Prime quickly disables the captain, summoning the winds to knock him back, "I'm one of the good guys here!"

Raising the very earth beneath their feet, Prime creates a wall of dirt, blocking the soldiers advance.

"Corporal, light the signal for Lexor! We have a powerful mage on our hands!"

As soon as the beacon flares up in the sky, Prime hears an unmistakeable incantation, "Sheath these feet in a driving gale, make swift these legs over land I sail!"

In a flash, the earth wall Prime created to distance himself and the soldiers shatters, pummeled through by the sheer force of speed.

"Lexor, I presume." said Prime calmly, as he unsheathed his staff to prepare for battle.

"And who might you be?" Lexor questioned.
"He claims to be a relative of Ulgoth!" shouted the Seraph Captain. "He commands the very elements as HE does!"

"My name is Prime, and I can assure you I am on the side of good. There has got to be a misunderstanding here!"

"You say you are on the side of good. Do you dare accept the bearer of knowledge's touch? But be forewarned, should there be any false truths, you will not be spared my wrath!" Lexor retorted.

"I accept. And if I should be found wrongly accused?"

"An apology will be in order, and kindness will be recipocrated."

Turning to face the Seraphs, "I am going to have to take him to my brother, Arzon. Be assured every facet of truth will be uncovered. I shall send word by nightfall."

To be continued on my 3rd character, Arzon!


I really like the look but you need to present it!
Take some nice screens from fitting locations with cool poses.
2017-04-14 7:59

Elessar Taralom
The armour and dyes in itself look very interesting and remind me a lot of Cantha actually
I agree with Hylek though, the presentation is way too minimal to really justify a gold :/
2017-04-14 20:52

Thank you for your comments :) I will upload the new screens and story together next week. Currently trying to complete the SAB achievements before they are gone.
2017-04-14 21:15

Fashion Guru
I really like what you've got here. The armor looks great, and it goes really well with your cool-looking character.

I'd say to take the constructive criticism you've received to heart, but I'm not really one to criticize for the most part, so I'm just going to leave you with a gold because your character and this look reminded me of something I might draw, and it reflects my own tastes, ha ha. I think you did a good job with it.
2017-04-19 11:21

@ DigitalKathe - Thank you! I wanted to create a thief based on stereotypical japanese ninja assassins. Initially, I made the base color black, outlined with white and silver but it didn't turn out as nice as I had hoped.
2017-05-27 1:58 in reply to DigitalKathe