YorHa 2B (version 2!)
By kKagari on March 30th, 2017 |
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Decided to redo my YorHa, with proper white hair and sword. This time with SweetFX too! Also took some liberties with things like her shoulder, I feel like it gives her a more androidy feeling. White stockings to give it some contrast.
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 Blackkarmy Fashion Collector | Hi there! Firstly, before rating anything I wanted to give some quick tips on how you can improve your upload. Specifying dyes, weapons and accessories can help us recreate the look to see if there are any "flaws" outside the screenshots (as screenshots are supposed to present the look at its best), aswell as give advice on maybe tuning some dyes to different shades to achieve an even more beautiful style! Secondly, the description part should give some information about either the style, your character (story/background) or just thoughts on the creation of the style (what part did you start from, whats the progress). An informative section is always important for fellow stylists to see where you are going with the look. Your screenshots are nicely done, I would personally prefer some different areas and lighting situations, or just day/night shots. Now to the look itself as it is now. The overall look is pretty nice, not new to me at the very least. The strong contrats of white and black looks good on most armors so I don't wanna judge too much for dyes here. The combination of the single parts is well done and doesn't look out of place, and I like that extra little spice from the tempest shoulders. The sword also seems like a good addition as it's shape and size is pretty much in form with the armor. In terms of originality, well... at least it isn't any new to me really (except the shoulder use) so nothing special there. Personally I would love some dye diversity in the look, but keeping a black and white look has nothing wrong on it. I would love to see you improve this look even further, especially the descriptive part and the screenshots. Keep ir up! :) |
| 2017-03-31 8:56 | |
 Nezai Stylist | So simple, yet so amazing~ I love this! Minor issue of screens are a tad hard to see full detail of your work! |
| 2017-04-06 11:44 | |
 Huntawolfy Stylist | :D |
| 2017-08-22 2:10 |
