|the green eyes, dark body look works. So does the very nice looking green carapace bottom. |
What's hurting here is the weapon selection. On one hand bloodstone dagger that's too elegant for a tribal themed necro and too strong a source of red color. Necros have reds in their skills, but they're used in moderation with greens and blacks, while here it's monolitic red blade color wise that stands out instead of blending with rest of your design.
In offhand you have a very plain looking warhorn that would fit a krytan hunter or trapper themed character, but doesn't convey enough of neither tribal and/or asuran feel.
Also while i myself spend some time in the mists, they're not necessairly best scenery for screenshots for majority of looks, yours included.
SIlver from me - the foundation is good, and has potential. It just needs proper refinement and scenery.