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Elessar Taralom Fashionista | I really like the bacpiece in combination with the elixier gun on the screens, that´s a really clever idea! Reading your description I don´t quite feel the sketchy/pirate theme, mainly because you chose such light dyes; maybe try some less plant-y coat and go more in the direction of browns, beiges and some darker greens mixed in if you wanna keep that? |
2017-03-12 10:44 | |
frederickx Fashionista | I actually quite like this! It has a very cartoon sort of feel to it, with the greens contrasted starkly with the whites. It's a bit too clean though for a "sketchy" trader, she looks like she's wearing a freshly washed lab coat, more fitting for a scientist of sorts. Maybe tweak the theme a bit, I love this nostalgic two-tone neon color scheme. |
2017-03-12 11:05 | |
Meera Trendspotter | HI! Thank you so much! And well, I'm a roleplayer with around twenty pirate characters, so I have the 'classic', grungy pirate theme in plentyof variations already. Ahona here? I wanted a Sylvari with Celestial as the base dye, who subverts a few tropes, in look and personality, so it's my intention to have her not look like a typical pirate. But thanks for the input! |
2017-03-12 11:06 in reply to Elessar Taralom | |
Meera Trendspotter | Thank you as well! Well, as I already explained in my previous reply, she's supposed to look clean and un-piratey. (And well, she *is* a scientist, as in, an alchemist) |
2017-03-12 11:08 in reply to frederickx | |
Elessar Taralom Fashionista | Maybe you should add that in the description then, so it´s a little less misleading for the unknown onlooker :) I still think that the dye job is missing something, like a third dye for accentuation, anything to make it more interesting to look at and less bleak |
2017-03-12 11:11 in reply to Meera | |
Meera Trendspotter | Touche - Looking back on my description, I probably should give a little more information. And yes! I might work a purple dye in, to fit the chemicals in the backpiece and the gun. |
2017-03-12 11:13 in reply to Elessar Taralom | |
Elessar Taralom Fashionista | I think that would be a great idea! Looking forward to seeing the alternative version then :) |
2017-03-12 11:14 in reply to Meera |