|A little unoriginal when it comes to armour and dyes, but the great presentation at least validates a solid silver for me!|
|I like the colortheme I have a similar on my condiwar (https://gw2style.com/look.php?id=13113) I extra uploaded it coz they share chest and leg armor so dont be uncertain with ur choice! :) I do not like the aetherblade shoes however thats pretty subjective tho :D|
I also love some of ur screenshots maybe I add some more to my upload I like the idea of the water ones :o
|Thats fine yeah you can add to your upload I don't mind haha -- about the shoes, honestly I just wanted that tall-thigh length size but there weren't many options, so I had to do with what I owned :P|
|Yeah I will agree its a little unoriginal because theres similar ones out there, I didn't want to go for an entirely warrior-spikey-aggressive looking theme though either, but thanks for the input !!|
|There is a lot inbetween those two spectrums, just browse the site a bit and you will see how creative one can get with all armour types ^^|
It does pay off to boldly stray away from the meta from time to time
|Yeah agreed to that, will just take my time and look up more looks haha|
|It's really hard to make a comment in looks like that, cuz it's pretty much like Elessar said, the armor and dye mix is kinda unoriginal. But if u like the armor mix, maybe try to put some extra colors there? Like special color for the boots, different color for the metalic and leather parts?|
|I think you are on a good way to becoming a great stylist here!|
Id like to give you some tips regarding some critique-points i wouldve given this look:
First of all, the armor-comb looks quite nice ... but using 2 pieces of the same set which are close to each other (boot-leg combo in your case) is a bit unoriginal, so you need to make up for it with other exciting additions or a crazy colour-concept. You kept the style quite simple and it looks great, but thats why people find it lacking in originality. Also because the leg-piece is quite overused and meta-style :P
Its always nice to have more than two colours! Your dye-scheme looks good and stylish, but due to it consisting only of two colours it looks a bit unexciting. You couldve added a white dye to match your hairstyle. The belt of the legpiece wouldve been good for adding that e.g.
Generally the little ornaments are good for adding a third colour.
Rare weapons, backpieces and LEGIS are nice to have, but you have to think twice about presenting it alongside your looks!
I would say Sunrise looks quite fitting here, at least colour-wise, but the Bifrost looks a bit out of place. Sometimes you need to get different weapons to make your style convincing. You dont need to to transmute your precious legi, just get a cheap weapon you can use for presentation ;D
Sometimes i even have second armor-sets for style-purposes.
Your screens are quite nice but there are mainly 3 things that i noticed:
1: all of them are at night-time. While this might not be a huge issue, personally i like seeing a look in different lighting. And imo at least some screens should provide a daytime view since it shows your armor much better.
2: some screens are zoomed out a bit far. This is especially true for your gliding screens here. You should make some test-flights and adjust the camera with the camera settings.
3: you often have the same pose. This is about your channeling pose with the staff. It is a cool pose, but seeing it 4 times in a row, even at the same location, makes it a bit boring ;)
I hope this was a bit helpful to you.
Overall its a nice upload and a solid Silver!
If youd like to discuss anything in a bigger term or just have some questions, feel free to mail/whisper me ingame. My account name is in my bio :)
|Aw thanks both for the feedback! Yeah I did realize the dyes were a bit the same and didn't have variation and the screens were nighttime as well as the weapons being the same. I'll keep it in mind for next time, I guess I just got too caught up with it :P |