Ebonwrought - Zephyr 1330 AE RP outfit

By sovest555 on February 8th, 2017
Race: Sylvari
Gender: Male
Armor: Light
Color: Purple
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Changing from his winter coat and gifted crimson scarf, Ebon greets the warming weather with a fresh outfit.


Comments


Elessar Taralom
Fashionista
The armour mix might be quite intruiging, but I can barely see anything since you made a black blob out of him dyewise
I don´t mind a dark dye scheme, but using just one colour simply never looks good imo
Why not bring in some metallic and/or lighter purple highlights? Or build around the dye scheme of your weapons a little bit
Plus there ARE two sliders regarding presentation and with two screens (none of them even ingame) and barely any description I could not rate very high here :/
Since this is your first upload I´d like to give you the opportunity to change some stuff if you do care about votings, but as it is right now, the upload leaves a lot to wish for
2017-02-08 6:17

Hylek
Fashionista
As Elessar already told you, the armor-comb might be good, but i cannot tell since your colour-scheme makes it a dark blob :/
Nothing about this dark colour goes with your thoughts about "greets the warming weather with a fresh outfit" imo.
Also theres pretty much zero effort put into the presentation.
Maybe you can check out some other uploads on this site to get an impression of what to do to get good votes and how to present stuff :)
As it is now, i fear i cant rate very high :S
2017-02-08 6:48