Khione: Goddess of Ice

By DeadlyDahlia on January 8th, 2017
Race: Norn
Gender: Female
Armor: Heavy
Color: Blue
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Khione is the Greek goddess of snow, ice, and of winter; daughter of Boreas, the god of the north wind, and Orithyia, the lady of mountain gales. Like the snow, she can be both beautiful and destructive, emanating quiet peace for friends, and biting cold to any foe who dares cross her path.

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*Head armor is Ice Crown with Fluff dye, but as of posting this, that skin hasn't been added to the site yet.

Suggestions/critique welcome!


Comments


Fenral
Trendspotter
Hey, that is a nice first upload.
In my opinion the gloves do not fit, because the glow is taking much attention from the rest of the armor. Also the shoulders do look ok, but they do not match your main theme of a goddess.
I have seen the armor combination in the game (except for the Ice Crown), therefor it is not super unique and special.
The Abstract is: In my opinion the gloves, shoulders, the wings and the crown do not support each other. The outcome is an armor, where some pieces quarrel. I like the dye-job and that you used different angles. The 4th screen is my favourite with the light from the left corner. it is a nice first upload.

I suggest you, to look for other areas for your screens. Only Hoelbrak is a little boring.
Maybe use some skills and emotes and try to capture the moment.
At this moment it is silver for me, but there is room for improvement. I hope I could give you some attempts to think about.
I will try to stay tuned and will also change my rating, when you update your look.
2017-01-09 3:51

Eremite
Fashionista
Very impressive design. Very few looks pull off the radiant gloves as well as yours do. It fits like a glove. Well, the glove fits like a glove...=D
I love the armor choice and dye choices, it all fits smoothly with her facial features to give her a very regal and elegant look. Aloof and proud, like a queen, or a Goddess as per your story.
Gold!
2017-01-09 10:26

DeadlyDahlia
Stylist
Thank you, very constructive critique! Coincidentally, I am hoping to change the shoulders to Winter's Presence and the gloves to Glacial Gauntlets with a more muted blue glow to match the gem in the ice crown. Still working on getting those though!

Will keep in mind varying the screenshots when I get those items and re-upload :)
2017-01-09 12:52 in reply to Fenral

DeadlyDahlia
Stylist
Thank you! Much appreciated!
2017-01-09 12:53 in reply to Eremite

Fenral
Trendspotter
I am looking forward to see those screens :) best luck on getting winter's presence!
2017-01-09 13:19 in reply to DeadlyDahlia

Dishy
Fashion Collector
you say she's a goddess...
I look... and see a goddess...
Very nice! gold4u!
2017-01-10 14:49

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