|I do like your attempt on this theme!|
You armor-choice is quite nice and tasteful! The pieces fit together nicely and you didnt include any stuff that doesnt make sense (catears e.g.) ;)
The theme of red ribbons is nicely executed and adds some colour-highlights to your look.
For the rest of your colour-scheme i wouldve liked to see something else than pure black though!
Try "Charred" if you can afford it. It enhances the textures of the armor greatly and has a nice realistic hue. A cheaper alternative would be something like "Antique Bronze". You could also just try adding a third colour. Some beige or other neutral colours would work well i think. Just get away from the full black ^^
The staff you chose is a great addition to the look and fits your style!
Now to the presentation-part:
Your description should contain some thoughts about your look. Why did you chose certain pieces, colours, weapons? You can also "justify" weird armor-choices and try to convince the stylists here that they do make sense ;D
That usually works best if you have a story to tell about that armor/character.
For your screens you should:
- take some more
- find some different and interesting locations
- do cool poses with idle animations and weapon-skills
- get a good view on your character by using the camera-options in the settings (just to take the screens ofc)
- and if you are into that, edit your pictures or crop away ugly parts ;)
Overall a nice comb! Some different colour than black would be appreciated and you need to enhance your level of presentation.
Its a Silver from me now :)
|Hey! Thanks a lot for your input, it's much appreciated. I'll try to correct it as you advised!|
Once that's done, should I update this style or make a new one altogether.
If you are fast, you can just update this one. Keep in mind that people who already voted on this look, wont likely come back though (unless you reply to comments and tell them to ^^).
A new upload would make more sense then, though you should provide some bigger changes to your look to actually make it a "new" style (at least a different colour-scheme).
Some people do reupload their style with new screens, but im not a big fan of that.
But since you will change at least anything, i think, a new upload should be fine :)
Take your time then and try to create some cool screenshots! It might take a while, but once you figured out how to pose, it can be quite satisfying to see the good results in your screenshots ;D
|I'll do as you advise then, and probably upload something in the next few days. Again, thanks a lot!|