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Isabbanaifos Stylist | Good first upload. I really like the armor mix and the dyes, they make the ley weapons stand out quite a bit. The one thing I would say to add would be more screenshots, especially one from character select. Otherwise great upload. |
2016-11-06 19:58 | |
frederickx Fashionista | Love the dye scheme. Simple, realistic, nothing too flashy. The weapons don't quite fit, but they look good with the armor. Gold :) |
2016-11-06 20:57 | |
Exitus_Letalis Fashion Guru | Looks cute! Gold! |
2016-11-06 21:12 | |
Shaman Crinitus Stylist | The armor mix is pretty unique, and the dyes on the armor itself matched with the fur colors come together very nicely. I don't like those weapons with those dyes. I think if you wanted to use ley line weapons, you should incorporate touches of light blue trim into your armor dyes. It's not a major thing, and you do pull it off well as it is, but just a slight modification could really solidify the entire look. I would love to see this look in a wider variety of environments and lighting to get a better overall idea of what it looks like in game. The screens you've taken in Gilded Hollow are nice, but they're mostly in the exact same location. The few that aren't next to the giant crystal help a little, but get out in the big wide world and bring back some pics! She's a druid, not a skritt! Maybe some screenshots in the ley line tunnel in Dry Top, and perhaps Tangled Depths, as well as scenes in the Shiverpeaks, where she's from. A variety of poses and action shots like you've done is nice, just make sure they don't distract from showing off the armor. Try more angles as well as locations, and try to narrow it down to just one or two shots from the same location. Use a different pose and/or angle in each screenshot. You could stand to get up closer a little bit more, and bring the camera down a bit so that her lower half isn't cut off when you're up close. The relevant slider is "Vertical Position Near." You can also adjust Zoom Sensitivity all the way to the left in order to be more precise with how close you zoom in. You have a lot of potential with this look, and it's already gaining plenty of positive attention - rightfully so! It deserves to be shown off with a more diverse presentation. |
2016-11-06 22:53 | |
Elessar Taralom Fashionista | For a first upload this is really nice! The armour is well mixed and you played well with the dyes so it makes for an overall unique look Due to the ley line weapons incorporating a lot of blue I do miss this colour in the dye work a little, so maybe adding a light blue on one or two dye slots could improve the look even more! Seeing this is your first upload, your presentation is already quite convincing, especially the description Where you could still improve a little are the screens; your poses are great, but using only one location for screens does make it feel a little repetitive Plus there is always the possibility to use different camera settings (Horizontal/Vertical position, field of view) as they greatly improve your screens Overall I still want to give you a gold, but I hope you work on the suggestions for future uploads ^^ |
2016-11-07 5:25 | |
Hylek Fashionista | The look itself is quite nice! I like the colour-concept and the fact that you didnt use celestial and shadow abyss, but rather natural colours instead! Maybe you couldve used some leyline-armor to tie in the weapons a bit more ... but thats very minor critique ;) You provided a great description too! This is how i think a description should be! :D Just the screens seem a bit uninspired to me :/ Its not only the same location over and over again, its also the exact same spot and many poses feel doubled. If you can improve on the screens i will gladly give you a Gold, but right now they are holding me back :S Very high SIlver from me :) |
2016-11-07 8:32 | |
Naron Wanderer | Thank you all for the feedback and votes so far i really didn't think people will like it this much. I worked on the screens a bit and updated the description about the blue dye that was recommended. Adding blue dye to the actual armor really didn't work out for me.I also tried the ley-stone chest piece but it was a bit too much and the colors didn't work on that. |
2016-11-07 9:30 | |
Shaman Crinitus Stylist | I really love your second set of screenshots. They make such a world of difference! With a bunch of different environments to see the look in, I agree that blue dye might not be the best choice. All the different places give some more context and show off how well the dyes synergize with the weapons. I updated my vote to Gold, and I look forward to seeing more looks from you in the future. |
2016-11-08 21:07 in reply to Naron | |
Naron Wanderer | Thank you very much! I'm glad i was able to do screens that you like. x3 |
2016-11-11 9:56 in reply to Shaman Crinitus |