Masked Adventurer
By AlexJustice on October 15th, 2016 |
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My favorite look for my ranger
Lurking in the shadow
With my bow and arrow
Steady and aim
Strike down my foes
Comments
 Hylek Fashionista | I dont really get what you were aiming for style-wise tbh. At first sight the gloves stick out the most to me. They always look like heavy armor and therefore should be combined with some other metal-pieces to balance it out. The shoulders might have done that, but not the way you dyed them. The colours are too different from those of the gloves, to fit them into the comb. In general, your colour-concept seems a bit uninspired. Its pretty much all royal purple and glints crystal, which dont convince me on the armor-pieces youve chosen. The lemonade dye you threw in here, made it even weirder to look at. I guess it should look like gold? But i wouldve rather chosen a silvery hue to match the gloves. This way, the "gold" just looks out of place imo. Overall neither your armor-comb, nor your colour-concept seems to have a clear concept. I wouldve loved to read some thoughts about that rather weird combination in your description, but you only provided some standard one-liners, which seems a bit lazy tbh. Even lazier are your screens. It is the exact same location and in 4 of the screens you have the exact same pose ... which is the standard "standing around - pose", come on, you can do better! All in all i feel that the look lacks a clear concept and your presentation doesnt make up for it in any way! Theres much much room for improvement here! |
| 2016-10-16 12:14 | |
 AlexJustice Stylist | thank for taking your time to look at my post tbh it quite heartbroken but this is the 1st time stumbling on this site so i try it out never thought i would get a replay even though it quite heartbroken to read but gonna start some where right thank you for your time |
| 2016-10-26 22:27 in reply to Hylek | |
Hylek Fashionista | Im sorry for the harsh words and i hope you dont take it too personally :S I just had to give a fair critique, which considers the amount of work other stylists need to put into their uploads to achieve good votes. If you like to get further advice feel free to contact me ingame, my account-name is in my bio. I hope you still have motivation to upload styles here and are willing to improve in the mentioned areas :) |
| 2016-10-27 8:00 | |
 Lanaya Mirrorblade Trendspotter | It's really rather hard to get a highly rated look without a PC that can max graphics but your presentation can surely be improved. If your PC can handle it, maybe turn your graphics up when taking the screenshot, that's probably one of the biggest things to do. Maybe more screenshots where your character is fighting are doing a gesture in more diverse backdrops. |
| 2016-11-24 1:03 |