|The armor combination is nicely done and theme-fitting. But that's about all I can positively say about this sadly.|
The dyes feel way too dark and remind me more of some dark commander than a protector.
Personally, I dislike dyes such as Shadow Abyss, they can find great use but I would not suggest using them as main color on the armors. Maybe try to go with more natural steel colors like Gunmetal or Iron and mix them with a dark-ish red like Wrath. Shade (not shadow) dyes also go well on most steel armors, maybe try around with these?
Your weapons are nicely chosen but your armor is just too dark for the bloodstone weapons imo.
The screenshots are very plain and not much diversity can be seen in them, so maybe try to find some spots where your armor really shines and try action shots or use emotes for great poses. Also try to use camera settings like horizontal position and vertical position, field of view ot make even more awesome screenshots.
The description is very short and not really informative, maybe try to make it more informative by showing why you used which armor and what the thoughts behind the whole set and dyes were.
I'm gonna rate this a silver since I can see that you tried to make this a decent upload but I wish you take some of my words into consideration for making this upload a great one! :)