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Elessar Taralom Fashionista | For a first upload this is really neat! You have a nice mixture of armour going on which isn´t too easy to do on medium Asura imo This in one of the rare occasions were I do prefer the mask in her face, because she feels a little cross-eyed without it I love the mixture of Cocoa and Mischief, it´s an interesting dye combination that looks natural, yet doesn´t fall back on the typical brown/grey hues The scarf looks a little off due to the stripes; I think if you would simply dye it all dark it would flow better with the mask The presentation could need some improvement, yes, but I totally understand how one doesn´t nail that on the first upload; my tip would be: play around with camera settings a little more, change locations and poses (there are a lot of cool attack animations) so you keep the screens diverse! Still, for a first upload this is really nice, I like your little Asura and I am looking forward to seeing more from you in the future! ^^ |
2016-10-11 5:54 | |
Snapshark Trendspotter | Hehe she's not realy cross-eyed she just happens to make that face when i do /talk for a second ( thought it would be funny ) ^^, thanks for the advice and il try to improve on my next uploads :) |
2016-10-11 6:33 in reply to Elessar Taralom |