|Hey I like the mix and colours.|
But maybe you should try standing in front of a brighter background. It is a little hard to see you on you screenshots.
And I am not really a fan of the shoulder armour, when the gloves do look like touching them when fighting. It is a little kink of me- sorry :-S.
Also you could try to match the colour of the bone parts from your gloves and helmet.
|ok i have changed the screenshots e the color of helmet.|
|I took another look at your look and I think you did improve. Although I'm not a fan of the armor mix, it really is an original look. In my opinion another set of weapons would match better. But I understand, that you want to show the pricier weapons you gained. - The Guild Pillar really fits great.|
Some screens with close-ups would be great. :-)