Scientific Thief

By ichibirofl on October 4th, 2016
Race: Asura
Gender: Male
Armor: Medium
Color: Black
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Not much to say. Wanted matching outfit with scientific weapons. Got this. Hope you enjoy it!


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Blue Citrus
Wanderer
I really like it, great job! I think it could be improved with a good headpiece to really make it stand out. Also good job on the dyes but you could find an armour set which has a bit more detail and depth. Overall good job though!
2016-10-04 15:15

ichibirofl
Wanderer
Thank you for your comment. I've been trying to improve it for a long time, but the pieces I need are gemstore ones. If you have any ideas I'd love to hear them!
2016-10-04 15:26

Blackkarmy
Fashion Collector
I love what you did here! I love the dyejob and armor combination.
The set also fits well with the scientific weapons, big plus.
There are some things lacking so...
Sadly this is only a silver from me.
You can improve your upload greatly by adding a description (if you don't know what to write just look on some other uploads to get an idea) and better screenshots. Your screenshots are very far away and it's hard to see how the armor blends in with the scenery. I'm having a hard time myself with screenshots but all I can say is: Try to play around with the camera settings a bit and try to get a good scenery and angle for your shots. Also try action shots with emotes or weapon skills.
2016-10-04 16:03

ichibirofl
Wanderer
Thank you for the advices! That's my first time posting here. Took me a while to find the courage to let my "work" be judged. I'll try and improve on a 2.0 version of this. Thanks once again :)
2016-10-04 16:43

Elessar Taralom
Fashionista
The way you mixed the armour parts is really appealing, you used many different sets and they came together quite well! Medium Asura aren´t that easy imo, because a lot of armour looks squished on their little bodies, but this mix works quite well
I agree that adding a helmet could help to make him a little more unique and more Asura like, the Protean Helm comes to mind
I like your dyejob a little better on the ingame screen as the green looks a little more toxic there and fits better with the weapons; on the login screen it´s a little too minty for my taste, the scientific weapons have a slightly different dye scheme
Since this is your first upload it is totally okay that you haven´t mastered the art of screenshotting yet! Playing with the camera settings makes for some pretty nice scenic screens (especially Horizontal/Vertical position and Field of View); poses and location are also important
For description you don´t necessarily need to create a story if that isn´t your thing, but maybe just describe to us why you used which armourpiece and which dyes, just so we get a little insight in your thoughts
Overall this is still a really nice first upload, glad you decided to share ^^
2016-10-05 4:12

ichibirofl
Wanderer
Wow, the feedback here is really positive! I'll take all the advices and improve this look. I've actually been looking foward to make it even cooler, guess now I have some tips on how to do it. Thanks everyone for the feedback!
2016-10-06 17:16