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Hylek Fashionista | Well, as much as i love the whole tribal armor ... this is a bit boring imo :S Your colour-scheme is literally 50 shades of grey, which is a bit bland too. Also, theres a lot you could improve on your screenshots. First thing i noticed: every screens is extremely zoomed out, i can hardly enjoy the armor-comb here. since its rather difficult to see. To your description: Why do you specify the backpiece and staff when you didnt use it in any screen? You even wrote it yourself ... What i would suggest to improve this look: If you want to use the glittering staff that bad, adjust the colour-scheme to it and make her look like a fairy shaman or sth. To present it, you should then go to magical places (the grove would already be very fitting) and take some better screens. You should play with the camera options therefore. All in all, your character doesnt look bad, but its hard to look bad when using a full armor-set ;) To make it a nice upload you wouldve needed much better screens and colours imo, so theres much room for improvement. |
2016-10-01 6:21 | |
Elessar Taralom Fashionista | If you choose to go with a full armour set you do have to make up for the lack of creativity in the other categories imo and you did not fully achieve that I really like your dyes as they are natural and earthy and go well with your grey skin and I do feel that you could just show the Mursaat backpiece as it fits your overall appearance The Glittering staff doesn´t really fit here; I´d rather go for a ritualistic style (Etched, Modniir, Orrian, Godskull...) As for the screens I agree with Hylek; you should find more fitting locations (like the swamp in Queensdale for example) and play with the camera settings a little more, presentation matters ^^ |
2016-10-01 8:03 |