Jaded Legionnaire

By Dreamcore on September 24th, 2016
Race: Charr
Gender: Male
Armor: Heavy
Color: Green
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Rhovack was like any other Charr - he was brutal, aggressive and ready to do whatever it took to get the job done. He was a Legionnaire, a proud leader of his warband of like-minded soldiers. That was, until he stepped foot into the Mists one day on a routine patrol - a void, a portal to what looked like space appeared right in front of his team. It began to spit out spirit-like creatures, rotting, diseased... afflicted.

Rhovacks warband engaged them immediately, but they were too strong. He stood there frozen, in shock, not attacking the afflicted but not being attaked either - he watched his warband fall one by one until he was the only Charr left standing. Then the void cracked with a flash of green energy and a bright light shone from within. Another being, a human spirit dressed in intricate red and golden armor, stepped through. There was an air of importance and power surrounding the mysterious being as he walked slowly toward the Legionnaire.

For a moment it felt like time itself had stopped. The afflicted spirits that tore his warband to pieces had disappeared. Rhovack stood alone, he hadn't moved an inch, the bodies of his fallen comrades surrounding him. He stared blankly at the human spirit in front of him, whom had now finally made his way to where the Legionnaire was standing. The spirit stared back at Rhovack, looking into his eyes, gazing into his very soul. It was at this moment the silence was broken - a green energy began to flow into Rhovack, seemingly empowering him - "Together we have no equal."


Hey guys, this is my Charr Revenant, Rhovack. I wanted to go for a jade/Shiro-corrupted look, with the green jaded eyes and the jade shards growing on the hands/arms. But I still wanted to keep the soldier Legionnaire feel present with the rest of the armor. This is what I came up with, and I'm proud of it :)


I think you hit your story's theme very well. Gold!
2016-09-24 20:06

Very well done! You did a nice job!
2016-09-25 6:14

Elessar Taralom
I like the overall story and idea behind this and I super appreciate that you went for something thematic
Your weapons are spot on and the armour mix is unique
The gloves do feel a little out of place, but seeing that this is part of your topic I´ll let it slide
Your screens and description are wonderful and it is nice to see someone pay so much attention to detail!
One thing I´d definitely change though: the red on the pants; it clashes so much with the otherwise green theme of your look; I´d rather dye it green or maybe a simple brown to avoid this feeling super off
Still, gold ^^
2016-09-26 5:35

Thanks for your comments guys, much appreciated!
2016-09-26 10:41