Veteran Explorer of Orr

By Ruxsty on September 17th, 2016
Race: Human
Gender: Male
Armor: Heavy
Color: Brown
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First look on this site. oringally used the mystward revenant legs but there is some clipping issue with the pirate hook and the hip armour that bugs me to high heaven.


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Elessar Taralom
Fashionista
First of: it is standard procedure to add one or two screens from the character select so we can judge your toon in natural lighting
It´s not that the screens you did provide are bad, the composure is actually pretty nice, but they are just three screens, that isn´t really all too much
Description and screenshots are two parts of the rating system after all, so you should make an effort to get some nice points there as well (specifying dyes and weapons would be part of a complete description as well)
What I can judge from what I can see has a nice vibe to it armourwise, even though it´s a little boring to take top and legs from the same set
Your character got a nice veteran feel to him with the eye patch and the rugged beard and it feels like the dyes are nicely matched as well
Would this upload have a better overall presentation I am pretty sure it could be a gold, so if you decide to take my criticism into consideration I will gladly tweek my vote for you :)
2016-09-17 19:05

Ruxsty
Wanderer
Thanks for the feedback! i appreciate it, true with the boring dungeon armour, i also tried this with the mystward torso and the leyline torso, the Leyline looked okay but the blue ley effect ruined the dark colours i thought. ive updated with more images as you suggested from the character select screen.
2016-09-18 9:59 in reply to Elessar Taralom

Beanna
Fashion Guru
The dye job looks pretty neat, you should definitely complete the description.
2016-09-21 19:30

TheRainboWarrior
Stylist
I've been trying to complete a heavy armor pirate looking as well. Probably I'm just unlucky that I haven't caught the magnus eye patch or the pirate hook and peg-leg in the blacklion market for a while now so it's more pirate looking. Yours is looking pretty cool. Congrats!
2018-05-28 8:59