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Hylek Fashionista | I decided to comment on this look of yours because its my favorite one ... i do have some general critique for you though! First of all to the look: I really like the armor-comb you chose and how you used the golden colour to highlight the ornaments!!! The black colour takes out the excitement though. I suggest adding a third colour to the leg- and chestpiece to add some more details. Now to my general critique: Instead of rushing the upload for all of your looks, you should take much more time for a good presentation of each one! On every look you only have a few screens from the same location. Try to find different nice places, play around with the camera options and do some cool posing to create some good screenshots. Presenting your looks properly makes a huge difference on the votes you will receive! So take your time to upload each look! |
2016-09-16 13:09 | |
Elessar Taralom Fashionista | I can only encourage what Hylek told you: quality > quantity Take your time to upload looks that are well done (screens, description etc) rather than just throwing a lot at us at once For the look: I like the mix of armour pieces and her skin tone makes her stand out in the overall human female meta, but the dyes could need some work as the solid black doesn´t really do your look any favours Maybe invest in a dye like "Charred" or drop the gold to get smth more fitting for the black dyes, but as it is now the contrast is a bit too high to be pleasant to look at |
2016-09-17 19:11 |