|Wow, this is an amazing first upload! I love how you already delivered such great screens and story, I am highly impressed!|
The Aetherblade top is just one of the best ones for male light classes and although I thought it was quite overdone you managed to combine it with some unique armour pieces!
Your attention to detail is great and the dyes look natural and convincing
I do find the shoulders to be a little too broad, but I appreciate that you used a rarely seen piece
Definitely got my eyes on you in the future, gold! ^^
|The screenshots are neat but I don't think the 'steampunk' aetherblade chest matches with the mantle or the pants. Just my opinion.|
|Thanks :D ive looked at this site for a long time for ideas and thought i should finally share something that i made for a change. I am surprised the shoulder piece isnt used more honestly and I'm a huge fan of your looks too.|
|The concept is very interesting but I simply don't feel anything inquisitorial about this(just my taste I guess).However you still did make a fairly unique look and the effort you put into your first upload is self evident. The screenshots while not many are well done and along with the description are successful in telling the characters story. |
My main issue is with the chest/pants, the chest for my tastes doesn't belong into a inquisitorial role but nonetheless fits the shoulders,and as Beanna mentioned there is a noticeable inconsistency with the chest and pants.
Overall this is still a Gold vote for me! Good work :)
|I definitely tried to avoid showing off the pants too much in the screenshots as i still wasn't sure if they really fit in, they've grown on me since making the look but i'll be looking to change them up if i can find something better.|
|I like your firs upload! Awesome job! Gold!|
|Really nice and subtle outfit!|
The natural colours keep it very realistic.
I actually really like the aetherblade chest here. It adds this steampunky vibe, without overloading the look with mechanical pieces. Also the shoulders work very nice here, its a great armor-piece that is used a bit too rarely imo ;)
The screens are nice, though i feel like there is something missing ... some more different locations or sth. dunno.
Overall a great look tho! Take my Gold :D