Stone's Brink
By RandomWolf on August 20th, 2016 |
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Project idea:
I decided that I'm going to upload my characters and their current looks into this site. I would like to hear out your opinion regarding them. I've also taken the liberty of editing the screenshots to make them more appealing since my laptop isn't that great.
About the character:
Evanarys is a young sapling. She's not older than three. She channels the four elements, mainly Earth and Fire. She was a very curious sapling and had the desire of wanting to know more about the world. Sadly she had been awakened during Mordremoth's rising and things weren't looking too great for her and the sylvari in general.
Eva visited a Warden camp and started to spar with some of the warden, revealing her skill with magic which she was completely unware of. A Priory magister was visiting around when he spotted her and saw potential. He, a sylvari as well, decided to take her with him to Lion's Arch and then to the Shiverpeaks in order to begin tutoring her as a member of that order. Evanarys was thrilled and in time she developed a strong relationship with her mentor.
She and her mentor were enlisted with the Pack to defeat Mordremoth and she was super excited about that. She was going to see completely new things, even though the risk was high. And it was. The fleet was detroyed, but both Evanarys and her mentor survived. Both of them found themselves strangled in uncharted territory and had to find their way back to civilization. Sadly, Eva's mentor did not make it alive and offered his staff to his pupil.
She's currently still part of the Priory, but not as active. Eva has become an explorer and tries to guide others while attempting to guide herself as well.
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Updated: I have added new screenshots and her old and secondary staff! Hope you like them!
Comments
 MadEnigma Trendspotter | Solid discription, amazing screenshots, great dyes! Tremendous first upload in my opinion. |
| 2016-08-20 17:18 | |
 RandomWolf Trendspotter | Thank you so much! |
| 2016-08-20 17:34 in reply to MadEnigma | |
 AnaChronism Fashion Guru | I think it's a very solid look. The combo may not be too new but it is still a good looking one and I really like it. The only thing that I would change are the shoulders, something more exciting is a little better over here imo since the gloves are very subtile. I barely saw the one's you are using now and maybe you would be able to find something better. Other than that the different pieces are looking good together and I like this mix between cultural and non- cultural armour. The dyes are very pretty, very natural and earth- toned and matching your skin tone, haircolour and glow. The hair in general gives her a young and sort of cute appearance ^^ I really like your screens but I wouldn't recommend to put pics of a different look in here. It mostly distracts from the outfit you're presenting and I think it would be best if you could replace them with some more pretty skins of the other look! Overall I think especially for a first uplaod you did a great job here and you payed attention to her story and how to present your character properly and this deserves gold. I am looking forward to see more of you :3 |
| 2016-08-20 18:28 | |
RandomWolf Trendspotter | Thank you for the tips and all. Regarding the other screens.. they were taken by a friend at a really nice spot. I should make a new look regarding that look alone. And for the shoulder piece.. well. I don't really know what to use. I don't want anything too 'flashy'. I wish for something simple. And I'm glad to know that! I'm uploading more soon. Hope to hear from you as well! |
| 2016-08-20 18:35 in reply to AnaChronism | |
 Beanna Fashion Guru | The outfit is nice but the 'mechanical' staff feels very out of place in this more natural look imo. |
| 2016-08-20 20:55 | |
RandomWolf Trendspotter | It was a gift from a friend, and story-wise it belonged to her former and deceased mentor. It's a memory that she holds of him. But I get what you mean. |
| 2016-08-20 21:15 in reply to Beanna | |
 KestrelGirl Fashionista | Your other look was nice already, but this is fabulous! I agree that the staff is out of place though; I wonder if you could find one with a similar model and say Eva modified the gift to suit her better? :P And by the way, I don't think you need a shoulder piece at all. The screens of the old look are alright, just mention what they are and why they're there in the post. |
| 2016-08-21 3:58 | |
 Elessar Taralom Fashionista | For your first upload this really is amazing! The screens are very very good and I love the overall autumnal feeling she conveys throug her dyes, nicely done I agree that the staff is a little out of place, the story for it aside, but I would love to see you create something around the staff particularly Overall a really good first upload and definitely a gold ^^ |
| 2016-08-21 5:06 | |
 Eremite Fashionista | I never really liked 'soft' looking female sylvari. But I must admit I am bought over by your style and dyes. Gold! |
| 2016-08-21 10:44 | |
 Veranis Wanderer | Finnaly something more unique and not boring TA or cultural sylvary armor mixed with other parts variants. |
| 2016-08-21 12:29 | |
 Inverse93 Stylist | I love the way this set flows! Everything seems to come together in a very natural way.. Love it! |
| 2016-08-21 16:13 |
