Yumishiori the Necro (formally Ayàme) ((updated))

By Ayame Rhul on July 5th, 2016
Race: Sylvari
Gender: Female
Armor: Light
Color: Silver
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((updated to show changes of name, screens shots, and description))

Yumishiori is a necro who favors minion mastery over the general mix of all necromantic powers. She was born to a twin who also is a necromancer, that prefers the mix of necromantic skills.


Elessar Taralom
For a first upload this is really well made!
The armour mix works well for the staff and your general theme, especially the mask which goes really well with your particular face
I really like the colours you chose, the Beige looks really good here and adds to the natural feeling of the look
You chose good weapons to accompany the staff, which is the centrepiece of all this!
Some formalities for really getting good votes here: it´s nice to see that you added a lot of screenshots, but quality goes over quantity in this case
Try to find fitting locations for your characters and play a little with the camera settings to get more diverse screens
You can also add a little more description; it doesn´t have to be a story if you don´t like writing those, just a little insight to your character creation ^^
And also add a screen from the character login so we can see your character in full and in natural lighting
For a first upload this is still really nice and I look forward to see more from you ^^
2016-07-06 7:46

Fashion Collector
Mostly agree with Elessar in the feedback. Just I difer about the description, 'cos I always prefer a story.
2016-07-06 16:54

Ayame Rhul
Thank you for the feedback! I will be updating this soon (ish). I'll also upload more looks later, just need to touch this one up and yea. lol but thank you for the critiques
2016-07-06 22:28 in reply to Elessar Taralom

Fashion Collector
I love this look! It's really nice to see looks that actually fit perfectly with Nevermore, not just super used armor skins that don't match the weapon at all, most likely just being used because it's a legendary. :P Really liked the play with the colors, how you made the simple gray not look empty, but fit the legendary too.
2016-07-08 0:09