|Is realy gud|
|I really love the story you wrote here! Good job on that!!!|
For your screens: i do appreciate your progress! They are nice closeups and you captured quite nice poses. I would really really like to see some screens out of pvp though.
Going with your story, some screens around the hunters lodge in queensdale would be interesting i think.
The outfit itself is quite decent! I like the natural colours you chose and the overall appearence is appealing. Im still not a fan of the red hair-colour (some darker, more natural red would be prefered) ... but i do remember that it is your personal sign, so i wont argue on that ;D
Over all its a silver from me.
|Interesting story and a nice variety of dyes. Love the little sloth on her back :)|
|I love your story, it's really beautiful and refreshing !|
The screens are nice too, if you post more don't hesitate to send me a notification I'd love to see them !
About the armor, maybe you should change the pants and shoulders. Those two pieces don't fit imo because the pants looks too "clean" for a nature look and the shoulders just look bizarre with your coat (still imo).
The dyes are good tho. And I love the fact that the red hair are your personal sign, it really gives something personal to your look. Her face is so sweet and lovely, that's awesome.
I'm gonna give you a gold, because I really enjoyed your story and dyes, and also because her face is really beautiful :3
|Aww thank you guys, I am really glad I did manage to make some level of improvements. Of course I will work on updating screenshots on both my outfits so far, but I am glad that I am receiving such positive responses telling me to keep going and working things out, I really appreciate it :D|
|I like it. Beautiful theme :)|
|JUST SHOUTING OUT THAT I UPDATED MY SCREENS! :)|
|^ I am not sure if I should reupload or not just so I can get fresh votes now that I have better screenshots :)|
|I am not sure what your screenshots looked like before, but these are really lovely now. I love how it looks like she is an explorer that is not afraid to get dirty but she still wants to present herself in a beautiful manner that still associates her with some mannerisms of nobility.|
The colouring is really beautiful and I love the way the scarf and the butterfly compliment her hair. I love the outfit combination too, it is feminine but without being too revealing or out of place as far as the screenshots show me.
Overall this is really fabulous and it is a gold from me! :)
|I think your screens are really good. Original armor and dye choices. Gold!|