Ley Line Elementalist
By Sniekr on May 31st, 2016 |
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My first post, enjoy :).
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 AnaChronism Fashion Guru | I see you are new to this site so I will give you some tiny advices ^^ First of all it would be nice if you would deliver a little longer description. It really doesn't have to be a three pages long story or a story at all, just a description about your intentions you had when you created this look or maybe a short explaination why you went for some of the armour pieces. It's just always a nice thing to read! I am glad that you specified your armour and the dyes, you can also always specify your weapons, as well it's a good wrapped up way to show the items you used. Now to the look itself! I actually like this ley- line inspired look here. The armour combo looks really good on your character and I am glad that you didn't use too many Leystone armour pieces! I especially like the combo between the chestpiece and the Carapace Pants. I think the only thing I am not too much of a fan of are the boots but it's just a personal choice here. I like the general dyescheme you were going for and especially o the Pants section the blue dye looks really amazing but I have to say that I would love to see a bit more tha just two basic colours. Your armour pieces are giving you more than just one or two slots and I think a nice third dye would be really appreciated here maybe something like a "dirty" white like Mithril? It would at least catch up with the Ley- Line- Staff you are using and with your theme in general! I like your screens but I would also love to see more, have you tried some other light locations? Also don't hesitade on trying some action and close up shots! If you are unsure how to create a nice close up shot and how to zoom in your character- there are some camera settings in the options- menue. You could basically play around with all those different settings in order to get some more diverse screenshots. Overall I think this is a very solid first impression of yours and I really like what you did here and I hope that you accept some of my advices and suggestions! You are really getting there and some minor changes would bring you gold! |
| 2016-05-31 18:15 |