|Hm, I understand the meaning of your story, but I don't really get the details^^'|
I really like the combination of gold and green on your armor and the armor combo itself looks pretty cool, too.
It is kind of a fancy and simple look at the same time :)
I think you should try to take some close up screens of him, if possible.
Your look itself it really cool, but it lacks a bit in presentation in the screenshots in my oppinion ;)